Oh, I wonder if you are
He who called with steady voice
Offering me one simple choice
Shall I stay or better leave?
Contemplatively I breathe
Now to bed I close my eyes
Think of you across the skies
I forgive you, now you know
My chosen path is that I go
One breath. Two breath. Three breath. Four
Eternal sleep, forevermore
Twinkle twinkle trusted friend
Take me there, to where it ends
Shining down your soft, white light
It calms me now and dulls my fright
Down below in bed I lie
With comforted heart I say goodbye
- a falling star
- a life-changing choice
- a mysterious phone call
- the phrase "I forgive you"
I tried to use everything in the prompt as always.
Oh gosh. I was attracted to the title and what the preview showed "Hey this sounds like a nursery rhyme!" and clicked on it.
It's soo much better than what I was expecting. I didn't know this was even a DD but after I read it, now I know.
I'm trying to sing it but "comforted" on the last line throws it off. I try to find another word synonymous to it, but that only pisses me off more -_-
Still, beautiful poem.